Friday, November 18, 2011

Features for my Creative Writing story.

Ok, im having troubles coming up with  different sites for my creative writing story. Such has where to get my background music, and stuff like that. Does anybody have any ideas???

Thursday, November 10, 2011

Examine The Age of Exploration Through Comments4Kids

I agree with you. A well delivered oral presentation can be really effective, through communication. A blog post can also be somewhat effective but I think a presentation would be the best choice. Thank you.

I really like the idea of getting to choose a project I wanted to do and not having to  wonder how im going to get through a project I don't like, but I also agree with you it could become very overwhelming.

Friday, November 4, 2011

The Girl- Creative Writing

This is my first paragraph for my creative writing story:
Great.... Why does Mom and Dad have to argue and yell all the time? I just don't get get how they fight non-stop. It just irritates ma and makes me feel like they forget i'm even here. I sit in my room and think of how things use to be when we still lived in Utah. How I loved those days of picnics in the park, where we played tag, took pictures, and just had a good time as a whole family. and don't even get me started on the family vacations, those were the best!!! But now things are beginning to change, i'm not sure i'm going to like this change.
What do you guys think???

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Commenting for Kids

This sounds like a really good starting paragraph for your story. Your post makes me want to read it now. Very interesting.

I really like your story Bryce. I like spending time on the river and knee boarding too. It is one of my favorite things to do when I go to the lake.

Kordell, this is a interesting story. I remember my first time shooting a deer, I was so happy and so was my family.
This is a good story Elizabeth. But you should add more details and make the story longer, since your story is so good.